Notice to the Public
12:03 AM |

It's not a poem
as the author (ehem.ehem) says
it's a Short Fictional Story

charlyn lalwet: visit my blogspot
ok?!
mao pineda: i did
galing m magsulat ah
poem b ung start?
charlyn lalwet: ung pinakamahaba?
nope
mao pineda: oo
anu un?
charlyn lalwet: fiction short story
hehe

mao pineda: i was thinking it was a poem kasi parang ang independent ng mga lines from each other
it looks like a poem! hahaha
charlyn lalwet: its only centered that's why it looks like poem
haha
it's a fiction story
one that reflected what happened to me for the past 2 months

mao pineda: hnd. parang poem tlga kasi hnd xa flowy na parang story. parang poen xa na choppy pero nagkwekwento
ung ganun


charlyn lalwet: ah
i knoiw na why you say its a poem
because it's lyrical
yung parang it you won't really get what it truly means
kasi it's not literal

mao pineda: hnd. ung structure. kasi db pag story parang nagfloflow. tgnan m ung sau parang independent bodies ung bawat line. para sakin. kaya un mukha xang poem para sakin

ung first part parang story

sa middle parang poem
ok.
what do you think??
=)